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for A Letter to the Ministry.

by telosphilos

person Persy
schedule June 19, 2021 at 12:00 AM

One word... YES!!!!!!

person wudelfin
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was just fantasic
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Wow. Very powerful. As disturbing as that was, I rather liked it.
person princess_zombie
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That\'s all I can say. Awesome job.
person DianaBottles
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a different take on the Marriage Law! I thought I'd seen every possible twist on it that existed, but your story is definitely different. I enjoyed Snape's tone - very bitter. While he never said that he loved Hermione, the fact that he took time to write such a letter to the Minister concerning Hermione and the other girls in her class shows that he had strong emotions regarding them. A human Snape who's actually IC. Great job!
person Javen Green
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful job. Very in character, and sad, but well done. I wonder what the wizarding publics reactions to a letter like this would be?
person clara Hamill
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the letter very bitter and strong.
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very disturbing, but a very appropriate answer to the marriage challenge! I liked Severus\' use of sarcasm and attention to explicit detail. Thare are a few spelling errors in there still but other than that, well written and engaging.
person Deeble
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god -- horrible but accurate, and so clearly Snape\'s voice that I didn\'t have to scroll down to the end to figure out who was speaking (well, writing).

It\'s easy to romanticize the marriage law, and I\'ve certainly enjoyed some of the romanticized responses. But you\'ve captured what this law is at essence: an abomination.