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April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fab follow up. Love the last lines heh heh. Personally, I noticed no repetetiveness, but then I was reading it for the story, not to spot the mistakes. Had me hooked til the last.
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February 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... not bad, but I have to say that the constant repetition of the phrase "the boy" gets *really* annoying after a while.
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February 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi!
your ff lost is very good. I like it very much. the ending is very beautyful and I'm very happy to found this little story. please wrote more from this. I love them. ^^ bye *wave*
your ff lost is very good. I like it very much. the ending is very beautyful and I'm very happy to found this little story. please wrote more from this. I love them. ^^ bye *wave*
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February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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*awed and respectful silence, finally broken by an adoring whisper* Maeglin, I love you.
This is the most ethereal HP/LM fic I've ever read. The most ethereal fic I ever read at all. I hope you continue the series... For if you didn't then I'd probably be the one feeling lost. The only fic I ever read that could somewhat compare to this one is "Swan" by Just Silver; you can find it on ffn.
*still staring unbelievingly at her computer screen* *cannot talk- too perfect, too beautiful, too pure... So very much so that Runespoor could cry*
*awed and respectful silence, finally broken by an adoring whisper* Maeglin, I love you.
This is the most ethereal HP/LM fic I've ever read. The most ethereal fic I ever read at all. I hope you continue the series... For if you didn't then I'd probably be the one feeling lost. The only fic I ever read that could somewhat compare to this one is "Swan" by Just Silver; you can find it on ffn.
*still staring unbelievingly at her computer screen* *cannot talk- too perfect, too beautiful, too pure... So very much so that Runespoor could cry*
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February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ACK!! SO CLOSE!! Continue with the story... PLEASE!! The nightgown was a good touch, nice. Lucius and Harry... MUST READ!! Very good, excillent writing.