rate_review Reviews

This story has the potential to be really good. Perhaps you need a beta though. You make some silly mistakes, like using their instead of there, that draws attention away from quality of the story.
Good luck!

I love Trio fic too! This was very sexy, although you need to separate your paragraphs if you are changing time periods. Like when you said \"That was three weeks ago..\" you needed to start a new paragraph. Otherwise, pretty good. And thank you for deciding to do a couple of chapter as opposed to a one-shot. Good job!

I like the idea of the golden trio being tofether too. Please write more and soon! Eagerly awaiting!