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Very hot.. PLEASE update soon and PLEASE email me when you do..I can\'t wait til the next chapter!

I kind of feel a little bad for Ron. Poor schlub has no idea what they (Harry and Hermione) have planned him.him. I just hope he doesn\'t freak out when he finds out.

Oh, please write more soon. Write anything... I love your stories.

OMK Awesome story! Please write more! One problem though (I\'ve gotta point this out, it drives me crazy sometimes) -- There\'s a few grammatical errors, a few punctuation errors, and a few sentence fragments. You got a beta? If you need one, I\'d be up to the job. My English is pretty good. I\'m mostly good with grammer and spelling, but I can do teh punctuation thing if needed. If you want me to beta the story, just drop me a line and I\'d be glad to help! Oh, and email me when you update, too, please!

~Ty

i really like the premise. hermione\'s little evil plan to get them all together is great. harry\'s tortured soul riff is wonderful and believable and the poetry, or should i say flow-etry, was really good. i\'m gushing, i know, but i also, especially like the interaction between the three characters. it\'s so sweet. i\'m not so keen on harry being gay, but i can look past that since he\'s still going to be having fun with hermione. there are a lot of spelling errors though. i\'m sure you know that since your spell check is notoriously on the fritz. you need someone to proof read your stories. i volunteer if you\'re interested. anyway, i look forward to the next chapter.

you keep blaming your computer for the spelling mistakes. shame on you. you just need someone to check your work. anyway, another hot chapter. i like how focused hermione is on getting boys guys in bed, but it seems to me that\'s all she\'s doing. it seems it\'s just about sex. i know, we all want the sex, but there doesn\'t seem to be much romance or love involved. the love is implied because that\'s what we all think. without actually hittihe rhe reader over the head with declarations of love, maybe you can show us a bit more affection, a bit more caring, a bit more innocent sensuality. hopefully when you get all three together you show ron being a bit hesitant to do anything with harry, but have hermione and harry demonstrate how much they care for him and he can realize that it\'s right for them to do whatever it is you\'re going to get them to do. i think you have a great concept, makes me want to try my hand at it myself, but in this second chapter at least, i just didn\'t feel that there was much love there. it was all lust and scheming. not like hermione and harry at all.

I don\'t really know what to say...I\'m a little stunned but compelled to keep reading. Until next chapter, thanks.

how interesting. thought you hated the gryffindors, yet here you are writing about them. and what a chapter too. very hot. hermione is quite the controlling little vixen isn\'t she. wonder how ron will react to harry. that should be interesting, but then again you have ron thinking about harry in more then usual buddy buddy ways. anyway, let me just say i\'m a bit disappointed. i haven\'t heard from you in a while. no reviews. no emails. i\'m beginning to think... ah well. not the place i suppose. get the next chapter out quickly would you.

oooooooh...another Shaolin story....*grins like a loon* yay!

So is it really Ron that Harry wants? Is Hermione just a devious minx and after the both of them? Heheh!

Fantastique so far, write more soon, I can\'t wait!

In anticipation, and admiration as ever,

***Seva***

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! how dare you make my sweet Harry gay! Why?
I mean you write great smut but would it hurt you to write about Harry and Hermione or Hermoine and Draco?
And what\'s up with Winter? i miss my favourite story!
Besos

I haven\'t come across a trio story like this that wasn\'t a one-shot. This is intriguing. Thanks.