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for An Inconvenient Marriage

by Imhilien

schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is looking really good. I like it so far. Keep it up!

Tiffany
person DMS
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, angst and lemon! How are you going to manage more lemon? Snape\'s almost blown any future chances with Hermione. He\'s all \"whew, I don\'t have to do it any more!\" Idiot.

Nice to see Hermione as a chic, successful businesswoman.

It sounds like Snape\'s mother is still alive -- how about his father? How about Lucius Malfoy -- did he recover from his \"rare disease\"?
person katinka
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Interesting twist, I can\'t wait to see where this is going!
person spaz141
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so sad, I thought I\'d burst into tears. Brilliant and rather different spin on the marriage challege. You should be proud. I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very good so far. I think seeing her now he\'s slowly realizing what he has lost. And I think it will take some wooing on his part to soften her up. She needs to let him know that she wanted to be with him but his indifference drove her away. Please updat soon.
person Miki
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this....does the antidote work though? Update so we can see.