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person AriadneElda
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you should definitely write a sequel! Hermione and Draco have to continue this game of seduction. It was so hot, and funny(?) amusing(?) at the same time. I don\'t think these are the right words but I hope you get my meaning. So, please, write a sequel! As to who won this game, I\'m not sure. Maybe both, I\'d say...
person Lori
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! I think a sequel would be great. I\'m looking forward to it. Thank you.
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very very good. I think that your OOC parts fit very well with the story. again, very well done, I will anxiously await a sequel!
person Merete
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, that was goooooooood!!!! And sequel? Yes, please!
Also if it was a bit OOC it wasn\'t glaring. I didn\'t even consider it until I read your note at the end.
person cofaym
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You kept me up past my bed time!!! (which means this was worth it). I LOOOOOVE blow pops baby. I have even seduced gay men with tootsie pops - it\'s a blast. I knew she was gonna do that at the end too - I had a college friend who did that with dill pickles and made boys wince in pain - twas great *giggles*. K, hyper sleepy now. Beddyby!!!
person Amber
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was just awesome! Hot, hot, hot!
person Angsty
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOC or not, this story was hot! *Claps loudly* Gotta hand it to you, this chapter was killer. I enjoyed it a lot with all the flirting and sexual tension. As for Draco and Hermione--my goodness, you sure got me addicted. Anyway, brilliant chapter.