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by h0lden

schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is great
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person illnevertell
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM

All I can say after reading that is... WHEW!! That made my thighs sweat !!! That was one one sizzling hot chapter! I really enjoyed that and now my husband will reap the benefits of it! I am going to go and attack him now. I cant wait to read more. This is another gem holden. Your stories never dissapoint me.

~ Jaimie ~
person spaz141
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a flash back - I don\'t think I\'ve ever read about Severus and another student before. Interesting. What will happen next? Can\'t wait to find out.
person Wandlady
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do love your stories and this one too, but I have to admit I wasn\'t thrilled with the idea that Snape had screwed a student before. I love the HG/SS stories when Hermione is a student but the idea that Snape had previoulsy screwed another student is somehow a big turn-off. It makes Hermione less special and it make it seem like Snape is just another guy getting off on shagging students.

In any case I do love your writing and I suppose this is just a problem with me (not liking the Snape and another student thing).
person WandLady
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do love your stories and this one too, but I have to admit I wasn\'t thrilled with the idea that Snape had screwed a student before. I love the HG/SS stories when Hermione is a student but the idea that Snape had previoulsy scd and another student is somehow a big turn-off. It makes Hermione less special and it make it seem like Snape is just another guy getting off on shagging students.

In any casdo ldo love your writing and I suppose this is just a problem with me (not liking the Snape and another student thing).
person spaz141
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the detail you put into this fic. The watermellons look promising(sp). Thanks.
person spaz141
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If this is the end, then you are a meany. I want a payoff. Alas you can\'t always get what you want. I hope I\'m not waiting in vain for chapter three. I think this is your best work todate. Thanks.
person Jayne
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, that looks promising. Write more ASAP! email me if u need a beta reader!!!!!!!!!!
person Miki
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I really like your rendition of Snape so far. I know you will post...so I\'ll just keep checking.