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by SydneyBlake

person sora
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. But then again I am sick minded. The drug part confuzzled me a bit though
person klaya
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Catie
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry this story had a good idea but how you wrote it was horrible!!! Im not sure if this is your first story
or what but...it went way to fast and it lacked a lot of detail. I can tell you\'ve never written a sex
scence before. It almost sounds like you know NOTHING about sex.
person Lindsay
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! thats a horrrible horrible thing u did to hermione !!! she doesnt deserve to die like that!!! i like it until that part!!! omg! it was okay.... :\'( crying for hermione....
person Meh
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, noo offense, but that ending was kind of weak... It wasn\'t really morbid, it was like, attempted gross/you got bored of writing so cut it off nice a quick with a cheap ending... anyway.. yeah
person ME
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was twisted. Try to be less morbid.
person SomeChick...?
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! Maybe I\'m really sick in the head... but I found that SO FUNNY!!!!!! I am in tears from my laughter.... haha...
*wipes at tears* Woo, maybe I should look for a shrink...
Bye!
*walks away*
person Galadriel
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That is so horrible,
person Triospleasure
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sick...............................

Label your summary Character death should not be a suprise.



Trio
person christine
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was good, i liked it alot, finally he corrupts the poor soul of hermione granger....muwhaa muwhaa!!! lol!! but yeah that was goo, so what happens to harry and r did did they say anything to draco? did they know?? either way it was good!!