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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another chapter would be really good right about now. This is great.
-Cheers :)
-Cheers :)
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story a lot. Please remember to proof read your stuff as spell check does not get it all. You\'re is the contraction of you are not your. The Gull of the man???? He has a sea gull? Or does he have Gall???
It may seem picky, but sometimes these errors are enough to put people off your story.
It may seem picky, but sometimes these errors are enough to put people off your story.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! another chapter. please keep them coming! this story is so original and i cant keep my eyes away from it! update soon!
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this story since you first posted it and I love it. But, I feel like I keep reading the same thing over and over. Sachel is a player, he wants Hermione, she keeps slipping through his grasp and Severus is seems to be at the right place at the right time. The sbasibasic thing seems to happen in each paragraph so far, there doesn\'t seem to be any progression beyond that. I love the premise and I like how you have set everything up. I\'m just hoping something different will happen.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your story so far, and I can\'t wait to see what happens during their talk. One nit-pik though, I think you want the word \'gall\' not \'gull\'.
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
two for the price of one- how could it get better than having two snapes?
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kick ass loving this story so far. I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!!!
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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! and i thought i got out of hand when people wrote fics about Snape! now he has a twin and its like two good parts of one great character! AH! you have to update!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I borrow them both for a few hours. Please!!!!!!! This fic is just what i needed after a hard days work. Keep the muses going i need more.