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Good lord. I don\'t know how you came up with this, but it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Please don\'t let the bad reviews get to you. They suck, but they\'re just uber jealous.

Hey,
Don\'t even listen to what all those people are saying. I love your work, and think this is a greasory.ory. I love the control for dominance especially in the last chapter. Very powerful and very sultry. Keep writing, and keep in mind, most of the people who nitpick probably can\'t write worth shit. ;)
Keep It Up,
Olivia

P.S. If you ever need a Beta, just write me.

Whee! I love this, absolutely love it! Update ASAP please!

I love your fic, the character of Snape\'s brother is very good!
Don\'t give up this wonderful fic! Pleasssssssssssse
Orestes

hey, this is a GREAT fic. When I read what you said about some people not liking this I HAD to review and let you know that I think you are doing great. It is funny and sexy at the same time. So keep up the good work and please don\'t get discouraged!

I really am enjoying your story as it seems to be an original plot with good dialogue and interaction between the characters. Very sorry that you are getting flames because of misspelled words and other \"technical\" issues. You say you have a good beta, but a good beta is SUPPOSED to fix the misspelled words and other technical issues to make your writing better. Your story is great, but it would be even better fixed. You are doing a great job, and I\'m really looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

If you would like someone else to beta for you, I don\'t mind helping you out. Just drop me an email. :)

I have been reading and enjoying your story - I also read the reviews after reading your A/N at the end of chapter 5. Yes, spelling and other mistakes do spoil an otherwise good plot base and some rather good dialogue. Don\'t give in - your beta may be a good friend, but a beta is to help you correct the errors in your story. Keep your friend, but if you have spell check on your computer, also try the dictionary part. That may help you a great deal. This is not a flame - only an example - \"Snape

Bree, I\'m really enjoying the story so far, it\'s funny and original however, the spelling and gramatical errors are distracting and detracting from an otherwise really good, entertaining story. I read all of the reviews left thus far and none of them have been nitpickee nor have they been flames, they have all been honest, well intentioned constructcritcriticisms. The very meaning of being a writer is that you take ideas and convert them into a coherent, smoothly flowing story with words and those words need to be spelleght,ght, punctuated correctly and used correctly. No one is tryng to diss you, we are trying to help you be a better writer, that is what most writers want and ask for.

I hope you continue with the story and I also hope that you take some of the very good advice that has been given to you.

it\'s great, its so nice to read a story that doesnt go along the same lines as every other one, its different and well written and yes there are typos but who cares, its good, no its really good, please continue with this, thanx for the diversity
shaz

Here\'s what I think. Aparom hom having a few spelling mistakes, I don\'t see anything wrong with this story. I would never stop reading a story because of a minor thing like that. Specially a great story like this one. It\'s fresh, funny and very sexy and you got my attention. So don\'t let little things like that stop you from doing the great job you\'re doing!

I can\'t wait for an update! Please do!