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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Severus\' plan works. He needs to get his trouble making brother out of there. And I hope that you can at least keep Hermione as the one thing Sachiel can\'t have and Severus can.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DONT MAKE ME START DISSING YOUR STORY! just update to avoid any problems...
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleeease don\'t let Hermione have sex with the twin! Yuck! Thanks for the update, sorry to read about your health problems, hope you are feeling better.
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it! please make this update much quicker!!!
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE!!??!?!?!?!?!?
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
come on i love your story and i would worship you if you updated it! please update soon!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don\'t know why everyone\'s flaming you because I think you\'ve done a great job! I love stories that remain fairly true to canon yet are still believable and you have done that really well. As a native speaker of English that is desperately trying to gain enough proficieny in Spanish to post some fanfiction, I understand how difficult it is to write in a foreign language and I think you\'ve done quite well. Keep up the good work!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Just wanted to let you know that I really like your story.
I can\'t wait to read more, so I hope that you\'ll update soon!
~Tikina~
Just wanted to let you know that I really like your story.
I can\'t wait to read more, so I hope that you\'ll update soon!
~Tikina~
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoyimg the relationship of snape and his brother (twin snapes god i\'m in heaven). I always knew that Hermione was a bad girl at heart and the \"two can play that game\" line finally showed it. The pent up aggresion that snape is showing is always fun i would really love to see him let loose and allow it all just burst to the surface (thats just me hving my \"evil teacher\" fantasy). I have not really noticed that many errors and you are right that this is for fun and if people can not take it that way they should not read it. Keep it coming. Sorry for not reveiwing after every chapter but whe i start readng something that i really like i like to finish it. Don\'t make us wait to long for the next instalment please.
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