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for Tender Trap

by Hawklaw

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person amsev
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"And was stopped short at the most beautiful sight she had ever seen. Severus Snape, onetime bane of her existence, was standing naked at what she assumed was the entrance to his bathroom.\"

Very nicely written PWP!! Hubba hubba! (fans self)
person TeaRoses
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee, that was cute! And sexy! Good job!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a FABULOUSLY SEXY piece!!! I really like the way that everything went & \'fell\' into place from the begininng;-) I also enjoyed how you ended it!!! BEAUTIFUL!!! Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. Oh my, o my! That got my temperature up. Is it hot in here? I think I need ice packs for my eyes. They\'re too hot.

Nice ficlet. I look forward to reading whatever else you come up with.

Cheers.
person buttercup
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do write the most delicious smut. Enjoyed this one particularly, but you already knew that. :D And now for the shamless fangirling:MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!
person Pearle
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. Light, fluffy.
person azulkan2
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just what I needed tonight. Some great, hot PWP! Thanks, you made my night.