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for Fireworks

by mbassan

person mel
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful... just absolutely wonderful
person melisande88
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Areola!! Cute story. Please drop me a note at my new email address: eightlet@earthlink.net I\'m trying to find you, we need to chat about our story!! --Meli
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! Unusual pairing but you made it believable. You got the characterization just right. I juts loved the line after Ginny asked him if he was thinking of proposing. Ginny, are you mental? It made me laugh out loud. Once again, great job.
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, Areola. I think I actually read a tamed down version of it last year at FictionAlley.
Hey you called George \"Gorge\" in the fic, if you want to correct it.

I look forward to seeing your next work. Any more short ficlets in the future?

Cheers!!
person mbassan
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for directing my attention to that typo, deb! It\'s corrected now. And yes, Firks hks had been posted (and still appears) several months ago (in a tamed version) at FA. I was never completely satisfied with the story at its former format, though, so it\'s been thorough few changes as well as the rating upgrade. I hope you liked it better now :-).

As to more short ficlets in the future- I\'m not sure. I do write stand-alones from time to time, but their rating is usually too low for these stories to be posted on AFF. But perhaps I\'ll tweak them a little the way I did with Fireworks. We\'ll see.

Thank you for your kind words.