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for Belle of the Ball

by alicat999

person exotic-rock-princess
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Keep up the good work. I can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen between Snape and Hermione.
person t.
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is really great!
person dopamine
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did u try putting this on www.fanfiction.net
i think u\'d get much more reviews (and reading) there
great stuff,anyway
person Alicia
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t stop writing!Keep going!Your doing great!Go you!
person Min
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update, I liked this chapter just like the previous chapters.
Keep up the good work and I\'ll keep reviewing,
though If I may say so, they\'re just some short words of praise and nothing else. =)

//Min..
person Alicia
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!Don;t Stop writing ok?I hope Viktor will kiss hermione,to make the plot more twisted!
person Jamie
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far. Keep up the great writing and I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!
person Rachel
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This looks promising! I like how playful your writing style is. However, I am often a bit distracted by the occasional spelling and grammar errors. Other than that, I look forward to reading more!
person selened
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plotline so far. I\'ll be very interestedsee see what Snape makes of Crum. I wonder if Draco has it in him to really fall for Hermione. Thanks for posting.
person Alpha
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, keep writing. Use your spell checker before posting -- there are a few typos here and there, not obtrusive but just concrit as you asked. Story works well, love the rare orchids. Adding Krum is great! I can\'t wait to see how Severus reacts!