rate_review Reviews

I\'ve followed your story for quite awhile, couldn\'t wait for you to update. Eveytime you do, it seems to get better.

jeannette

loooooooooooove it!

Hey, I love the story. It\'s so good.

If you have an update list, please add my email address to it!

Now onto the review. There were a few minor spots that irked me... a few missplaced words etc. I can't pull up any examples in my mind right now, but though they did get my goat a bit, it wasn't to the point where I abandoned the story, which I usually do when I get frustrated with reading.

It makes mndernder if you perhaps have a beta? If not, I would highly reccomend asking around for someone willing... because you've got a great story here, and I think it could be positivly deliscious.
~Paige

I love it Email it to me when you put up a new chapter.

Hey! Great Story! I like the twist of the NYC mages! Keep it up, I hope you have the chance to update soon.

I like your story so far. Keep up the good work! What I don't understand is the transition between chapter 16 and 17. One minute they were in a fancy hotel room with two mysterious wizards from New York and the next they are making love to each other. Hermione never answered Draco's question about why he couldn't use magic, and although you wrote that it was a couple of hours later - you never said what happened to the two wizards. Did Hermione kill them? I had assumed that she knocked them out. Perhaps you skipped a chapter?

Great story so far - and please update soon!

i have real bad desire to know what happens next. please update real soon.

Hey OMG! I cant wait for the next chapter! How soon will it be out? I CANT WAIT! keep up the good work!

Yay! Action, even if not of the sexual kind, is always good.