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for More then Magic

by darkvixen

person Calad Sigilon
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, I must start out with the things I disliked. First and foremost, (and I have experiance in being gay) admittance that you love someone is NEVER easy. Of course it\'s too late now, but you can still use this for later stories (and there BETTER be later stories....). Onto the good stuff. It flows nicely, the paragraph breaks let the reader rest their eyes. Also, there is a very good level of detail. Overall, I give it a two thumbs up. Congradulations, and have a nice day!
person Dot...
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I just wanted to say that this is absolutly the best story i have ever read on AFF.net, and believe me, i\'ve read alot. I will definately follow your story! I love Sirius/Remus fics, and this is, by far, the best one ever!
person Santa\'s Clause
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.....all I can sa...W...WOW, i LOVED THAT!!!! you HAVE to write more