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by lunasnape

person Morning Fey
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start at all. I like the story idea so far. I wonder, is Asher someone of consequence that Snape would be worried about his threat? I imagine he\'s used to the dangers of a death eather, his life being in danger. It\'s proper to spell out small numbers rather than using the number signs. This has alot of potential, and the writing is good so far, so update soon.