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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

As The Princess Bride is one of my favorite movies, I would love to see you continue this. I know that these are old updates, but I am just finding my way to HP fiction ... particularly the HG/SS pairing.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i love this story so far

Keep going or DIE!!!!! :P

I\'m assuming that you based this off of the book/movie \"The Princess Bride.\" Loved the movie (I\'ve seen it enough to quote it) and this just seems to fit. Keep going! I can\'t wait to see how the R.O.U.S.\'s, Prince Humperdink are charcterized!!! ^_^ Oncve again, loved the first chapter!!!!

hi
it was clever of you to use \"i see no difference\" in place of \"as you wish\". have you really read this book or like you say , your grandfather read it to you. btw you skipped over my favourite line in the book -- people dlooklook at other people the way countess looked at the farm boy because of their teeth. it would have been good to hear your version. all in all a good effort. you should definitely write more. and this is not a flame but the princess bride was written by S Morgenstern. bill goldman just abridged the good parts version that you and i so love.

Cheers !!
Sohara

I love the Princess Bride take-off idea - \"I see no difference.\" Hee! A great start. I would say you need a beta though - there are a few little grammar/spelling errors (e.g., \"dower\" for \"dour\") that mar your otherwise good story. Thanks for sharing this with us!

I think you\'ve made a good start at capturing the spirit of the movie. I especially like that you picked \"I see no difference\" for the key ph. Su.

Please continue this story. It\'s very good, and I like the unusual plot. Please hurry and update.