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November 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really like these stories, the way you make them dark is wonderful :D
The plot is great. First Harry gets raped by Malfoy, because he forgets anyway. Here Draco gets shagged (haha "your blunt, bitten fingernails" gave it away, like Malfoy would bite his nails), as some kind of revenge from Harry's side? XD
I also really love the way, the character thinks of something, reach a conclusion and then repeat that conclusion with "he/I never do" "he/I always do". Like he has reached that conclusion so many times before. Gives the story a jaded, epic feeling, though the repetitions becomes a little annoying at the end. I thought that Draco was coming to reach some kind of knew conclusion, when he thought
"... You never hear me.
You never do."
Like Draco was finally becoming fed up. Probably not. Your way of telling is really great, romantic and tragic. It's so captivating that I forget about the fact, that you don't really use many descriptions as you did in "Shrouded in Black". I mean, like where are they? What damn wall? Well, as mentioned you can get away with it, because of the captivating musing Draco is making.
Well, really hope you'll continue XD
Sorry, you had to listen to this review!
The plot is great. First Harry gets raped by Malfoy, because he forgets anyway. Here Draco gets shagged (haha "your blunt, bitten fingernails" gave it away, like Malfoy would bite his nails), as some kind of revenge from Harry's side? XD
I also really love the way, the character thinks of something, reach a conclusion and then repeat that conclusion with "he/I never do" "he/I always do". Like he has reached that conclusion so many times before. Gives the story a jaded, epic feeling, though the repetitions becomes a little annoying at the end. I thought that Draco was coming to reach some kind of knew conclusion, when he thought
"... You never hear me.
You never do."
Like Draco was finally becoming fed up. Probably not. Your way of telling is really great, romantic and tragic. It's so captivating that I forget about the fact, that you don't really use many descriptions as you did in "Shrouded in Black". I mean, like where are they? What damn wall? Well, as mentioned you can get away with it, because of the captivating musing Draco is making.
Well, really hope you'll continue XD
Sorry, you had to listen to this review!
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July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know that this is the sequel but I'm a bit confused who is who...
I thought it Draco fucks Harry but at the end, the one I thought was Harry walks back to the dungeon?
Sorry, but I'm a bit confused...
Lils
I thought it Draco fucks Harry but at the end, the one I thought was Harry walks back to the dungeon?
Sorry, but I'm a bit confused...
Lils
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been waiting for this one since \"Shrouded in Black\". I was wondering why your DM was practically screaming \"Please owl me the Evil Overlord list\" in that one.