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for The Lion and the Veela

by Pegasus21

person Phoenix
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You doi realize that the reason that Bill is always paired off with Fleur is that it's canon...Right? Sure, she's the official bitch from hell...But they don't want the flamers/Mary Sue critics to tell them that their commiting canon rape...Trust me, it's not fun to have to read that in your reviews.
person eroburn
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mmmm chocolate - this story is like awesome chocolate. your other story is excellent so far:) gotta love the barefoot and pregnant idea. lol update please? :)
person reviewer
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'m so glad that you\'ve finally started this fic. I have never read a fic that involved michelle or bill but it sounds great and I hope you update this and your other fic soon. I know im demanding, but its not my fault if you write good stories. :)
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved how you kept bringing up Bill\'s stubbornesss. That he\'d want to keep his wife barefoot and pregnant.
I know that he and Michelle are going to be toer aer and that she will have at least 1 child for him, but as a scientist, I find it hard to believe his \"dream life\" will be EXACTLY as planned. Ha, ha, poor Bill.

So, Fleur is going to give them grief. Witch!

Hey, I\'ll take Charlie... I mean he and I both love dragons and all. (grins) You could play up Charlie\'s reflexes, if you like. He was a seeker after all.

Hope to read more soon.

Cheers.