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for Unquenchable

by threerings

person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew ... good one.
person Mandy
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'm pleased with the way the ending did not get all crap-sappy and like "Oh I love you lets go lie together like lvoers do." I'm all fine and well with lovely little stuff like that, but in a short shot like this, it just isn't appropriate. So thank you for leaving it out. Very nice approach and very nice dialogue. Props & Congrats.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Susan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written; good first attempt. Hope you do more. The lemons were quite steamy.
Um, in the intro, when you say \"this just popped up\" do you realize that\'s sort of a double-entendre?
person Sexyseverus
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! It was one of the best one chapter stories I have ever read. It\'s a different side of Severus and Hermione. Usually one is totally uninterested. But I applaud you on a job well done.
person Crystal56
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a really well written story, but very di I I liked it! Wow, you have a lot of talent!
person Pixi
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* oh wow................
person droxy
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes- as advertised- totally mindless smut =>

i needed a good dose of SS/HG snogging

thanks for writing it.