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for The love letter

by Lanamanckir

person Jewel
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wish that would happen to me...
*starts writing letters and putting them in a metal box* now where to put this box....
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story. Snape was awsome! He wasn't himself at all! and that's wonderful! I like it when he doesn't wear that scary mask of his :)
You did a wonderful work on this story, and the end was great! And from what I understood, Lavinia (wonderful name, by the way) is a witch, but she never realized it?
Too bad that there won't be a sequel to this story. It would've been wonderful to see the developement of their love :)
person Allwynd
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should make an epilouge
person ancientgirl
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Corny? I LOVE CORNY! That was great. And I had a feeling that was how it was goto hto happen. This story was just so fantastic, awesome, great, wonderful, I\'m running out of words here. I have one complaint though, actually more like a plea. You have to write s sequal. You can\'t just leave us here. I think it would be a wonderful story if you could show her assimilation into the wizard world, and it sounds like she may even have some power herself. You left quite an opening there at the end. I\'m going ot keep my fingers crossed for something from you soon. Please let me know if you decide to write something because I don\'t want to miss reading it.
person hephastus
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying this fic; what is going to happen to Lavinia? Does Snape manage to contact her? Keep writing! I\'m on tenterhooks!
Helen
person ancientgirl
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. At least Severus doesn\'t have to go back to do anymore spying so that\'s a good thing. And I\'ve been thinking about what you wrote in Chapter 11. I have a feeling I know exactly what happened to Lavinia and I think I also know why her husband is in that asylum. I won\'t say what is I think happened, but I\'ll lou kou know if I was right or wrong. Please update this soon. I\'m dying to read the next chapter. I\'ve been looking on the site every day at least 4 times a day just hoping you\'ve posted.
person star
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!!! I hope she didn\'t die!!! what a cliffy!! update soon!!!! btw I love this story!
person star
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really do love this story and I hope that there is a happy ending! Don\'t keep us waiting too long! :}

thanks for a great story
star
person ancientgirl
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me, just killing me. This story is so fucking romantic I can\'t stand it. I had tears in my eyes just thinking about Severus not being able to get her, adn I also got goosebumps when I read that last part of his letter to her \"be prepared, I love you.\" OH MY GOD!! Please I\'m begging you update this soon. I\'m keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are killing me, just killing me. This story is so fucking romantic I can\'t stand it. I had tears in my eyes just thinking about Severus not being able to get her, adn I also got goosebumps when I read that last part of his letter to her \"be prepared, I love you.\" OH MY GOD!! Please I\'m begging you update this soon. I\'m keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending.