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by Dryad

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 3... I am very interested in learning more about the potion that they are working on!!! Glad to see that Albus is more than willing to do what he can to help them!!!

I really like the way that they shared each other!!! Her wishing that she was perfect for him & him showing her that she is was BEAUTIFUL!!! Nice to see that she could earn house points & receive total satisfaction at the same time!!!

On to chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... Poor Bella!!! I am glad that she contacted Hermione, she deserves to be saved & protected!!! I am looking forward to seeing what part she will be playing in her revenge!!! Looking forward to MORE!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 & 2... There is probably a lot that I could say about these 1st 2 chapters of your story, but WOW is the 1 word that keeps coming to mind!!! You have really covered the emotional spectrum here & I am very much looking forward to seeing what will happen in your future updates!!! I do hope that the relationship between Severus & Hermione will progress well & that they will give each other everyt tha that they need to remain strong as well as together!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<