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December 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story, shame it
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW! I like your story. and thought lucius getting it in the ass in torture from hermione was a fit end to his miserable life. you have a very good imagination. this story is also very well written. very original idea too. I guess I am going to have to check your name and see if there are anyother stories you have written.
I like fantasy stories concerning rape, but the main word is fantasy. I knew this girl once, she was very open, flirtatious, very great to be around, then some jerk raped her and her personality changed. afraid to be alone, didnt trust or like men anymore. not open, basically the exact opposite of what she once was. I personally think men that rape their punishment should be locked in a room bound hand and foot with the woman they raped, and she holding a dull knive with full permission to do anything she wants...............
like I said, I like fantasy, but that is not reality......
I like fantasy stories concerning rape, but the main word is fantasy. I knew this girl once, she was very open, flirtatious, very great to be around, then some jerk raped her and her personality changed. afraid to be alone, didnt trust or like men anymore. not open, basically the exact opposite of what she once was. I personally think men that rape their punishment should be locked in a room bound hand and foot with the woman they raped, and she holding a dull knive with full permission to do anything she wants...............
like I said, I like fantasy, but that is not reality......
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Looking forward to more soon. Can\'t wait to see what the potion does to poor ol Tom.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I really like the idea that Hermione has, very imaginative on your part!!! Between Her & Severus they should get everything worked out in no time!!!
I also like the humor that you have included in this chapter as well, balances it out very nicely!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
I also like the humor that you have included in this chapter as well, balances it out very nicely!!! Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story. Like how Hermione got her revenge on Malfoy. And Bellatrix helping. Pretty neat idea for a spell as well.
Looking forward to more soon.
Looking forward to more soon.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like whatve rve read so far. keep it up :)
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... I like how you added some humor into this chapter, with the cushion & then with the quick retreat from dinner!!!
I do hope that Voldy will take Bella as his second in command, it would be very beneficial!!! I am also hoping that Hermione will NEVER have to get THAT close to the nasty thing!!!
Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
P.S., The coins for Bella are a very nice added touch!!!
I do hope that Voldy will take Bella as his second in command, it would be very beneficial!!! I am also hoping that Hermione will NEVER have to get THAT close to the nasty thing!!!
Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
P.S., The coins for Bella are a very nice added touch!!!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter. I really hope that we can trust Bella. Being raped by Dementors gave me chills. Can\'t wait for more.
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