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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I absolutely adore romantic Lucius/Harry. The necklace was a nice touch, too.
Might I suggest a beta? Although your story is lovely, some of the typos are rather confusing. You wouldn't even need a beta, really, just reread the story closely after you are finished writing it to catch those typos, although an outside party is always better at catching mistakes than the writer, no matter how well he or she writes.
Once again, beautiful story. I cannot wait to read more.
Dusty
Might I suggest a beta? Although your story is lovely, some of the typos are rather confusing. You wouldn't even need a beta, really, just reread the story closely after you are finished writing it to catch those typos, although an outside party is always better at catching mistakes than the writer, no matter how well he or she writes.
Once again, beautiful story. I cannot wait to read more.
Dusty
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
curse you, if your fic wasn't so amusing I would have been studying for that stupid final I have tomarrow.... grrr...
Anyways, loved the fic, write many many more ^_^
Anyways, loved the fic, write many many more ^_^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice Harry and Lucius. I can\'t help but wonder what Draco is up to though? He\'s just hanging out at the Manor, waiting for his half-sisters to jump on him? Not that I can\'t imagine that there isn\'t a line of people waiting to jump on Draco. Loved it.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great had my in stitches!!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh me luving vewry much... hahaha great end line LOL :D :D so true!!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was great I loved it ^-^ it made me laugh
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amusing
i like the neclace
and harrys revenge is great
i like the neclace
and harrys revenge is great
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOh! i like so far... please write what happens next i cant wait!! :D :D cya huni xx
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Harry/Lucius Slash Ship Pairing.
It was wonderful indeed and great.
The Sirius bashing was brilliant and loved.
The Malfoy Triplets were so cute!
Great job!
It was wonderful indeed and great.
The Sirius bashing was brilliant and loved.
The Malfoy Triplets were so cute!
Great job!
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please make a sequel!! Maybe it can be about the girls going to hogwarts?? I Love your fanfic and I hope you really do make a sequel!!