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for A Thank You Kiss

by famlia

schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was beyond fantastic!!! I sooooo loved the ending!!!
person Bellixies
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well...this was enterteining!!

XD

cheers
person koki
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my god you shouldnt take babies away from mothers(daddies) when they are first born!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person QueenB
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1 Okay, I'm missing something. I read a little canon (and saw one of the movies). When did Harry and Lucius go from being bitter enemies to trading jewel and kisses? Not that I mind but it's my first day diving into HP/LM territory and I was expecting more of the canon material before coming across something this...intimate.
person oogies4u
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was absolutely brilll...

giggles so much

DragZ
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh i laughed my assoff at the last chap.
person Kelly Zuerlein
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Go Harry Go about time the boy grew some balls and told people to get out of a least some part of his life instead of letting them run over him. Give them hell and have fun. Great writing by the way.
K.
person kiki
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
quite nice fanfics i must say, liove the tourmenting draco part but i'm not so sure about 3 years-olds having such a wide vocabluary...but then again m-preg is such a fasinating thing so all could happen! *lol, just occured to me* ;p
person helena
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have read this wonderful story several times and keep forgetting to post a review.I am a huge fan of harry/lucius and only read hp stories with them as a couple they are so hot.I never read threesomes so for me it is always a pleasure to find brilliant stories like this one with happy endings for my beautiful guys.ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. WELL DONE.LOVE THE BABIES AND HARRY SAYING TO LUCIUS NO WONDER HE HAD ALL THOSE TANTRUMS AND THROWING THINGS HE WAS CARRYING THREE TEMPERMENTAL MALFOYS.
person purrfus
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I generally prefer to leave positive feedback where possible, and tend to just not say anything bad.

Your story started with a bang and had such potential. However it came apart after the first few segments.

I typically perfer longer stories, but sometimes less is definitely more.