rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This was highly erotic. Very intriguing. I wanted to see more of their interaction afterward. Why does he let himself be dominated by her? And at times it was a bit confusing as to exactly what she was doing to him, for the positions that they were in, either her on him, and how he was positioned on the bed. I had trouble visualizing it. That aside, it was very sexual and the energy had a fantastic flow. Is it really possible to be astride a man with a vibrating dildo in both the girls arse and the mans? I find that to be a very unique idea... :) Anyway, congrats!

Yummy! - That's all I can say ;)

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

Very good, yummy too. I need to go tho *winnk* keep writing.

For pure porn, it\'s fine, but there\'s really nothing that makes the characters who they are. Without plot is cool, but a little word here or there showing that it\'s Hermione and Severus we\'re dealing with would make it better (like, as the story is now the names could be changed to Lee Jordan and Angelina Johnson without any other changes).

Hmm, kink is VERY GOOD! ^_~

Hmm, kink is VERY GOOD! ^_~