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well done!!! hope there will be more!!!

I like it. And you can call me puffin. Its get better and better with each chapter. I can\'t wait to read what happens next. Keep the chapters coming and keep up the good work.

Keep up the good work. I can\'t wait to read the next chatper. And thanks for emailing. I like the story and would like to keep up with it without haveing to find it. If its not to much trouble can you please email me very time you update. Thank you. And again keep up the good work.

you sure keep me hangin\'! please update!

Your smut is pretty good but you seem to be afraid to use other words to describe Draco\'s \'organ\' .. Salling it \'his sex\' is a cop out.. and organ isn\'t much better.. there are tons of euphamisms out there... prick, rod, staff, member, and a whole host of others.. try to be creative with your words and your smut will be so much better.

I am not trying to flame you just give a little advice... There is a wonderful yahoogroup called the Smutty Claom tom they have a bunch of lonks and advice on writing smut. i urge you to take a look and I promise your smut will be so much better!

Z-

Please update soon. Please email me when you update. It that good.

This is a great story. I read the one before it and really enjoyed it. i just have one question, who is Jayde. I noticed at least twice that name in the story and was wonder if I missed something. I just wanted to make sure I diddn\'t miss anything.

aaaaaaaaarrgh, cliffies! pleeease update soon!

Hello reviewers, I was just wanted to say thank you to those that have already reviewed my stories. :D

For Lady LeNay Malfoy, \"Jayde\" is a OFC I made up - you can go check her out in \"Secrets\", a novel-length story I\'m writing, but I had originally made the visuals for Jaybut but decided it looked better with the cast instead. So that\'s why \"Jayde\" is in there...please excuse me if her name pops up. But I\'m happy you like the story. I\'ll be writing as long as I know you guys are reading!

Well this is getting interesting. Please update soon. I acn\'t wait for more.