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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted another sex scene. I like sex scenes. Just make it slow and sensual, letting evermentment come out to play.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job with this fic so far. I really like the story about the Gods and Harry and Draco being decendants of them. I\'m not to crazy about Snape being a dirty old man in this story, well at least not that bad anyway. I\'m looking forward to more, please update soon.
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wowie! definitely didn\'t see that one coming... especially Snape being pervy. Hee hee, he makes me laugh. ^^ I like this story, very original, in my personal opinion
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol! I like what you did to Snape. Disgusting perv! *sniggers*
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey great!!! :) i cannot alwaevieeview right away, cause i\'m not online everyday, but it was nice to have 3 chapters at once :) lol i do hav com complain...maybe it\'s cause it\'s almost 2am and i\'m extremely tired, but snape is making me feel like puking haha. i swear...what a pervert!!!! but it\'s way cool...and also cool to see you being interested in the greek mythologie/myths :) continue fast xx Angel
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I saw your responses before AFF fucked things up and I don\'t think I write smut well. I think you do a great job! Hmm...I like the idea you are going at, I just need more action *licks lips* and calm down Snape a little - lol.
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey
i can\'t wait for more!!!!
Alysha
i can\'t wait for more!!!!
Alysha
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Were your majorly disappointed with my attempt at the sex scenes?\"
Are you joking? HELLO! *bangs on Eadon\'s head* They\'re incredibly sexy, inventive and spell-binding yet not over the top in a way that it seems forced. You have to stop being so selfcritical! Your story is absolutely mesmerising and the way you are going about it is perfect. Don\'t fuss and get on with the next chapter! I have spoken!
Are you joking? HELLO! *bangs on Eadon\'s head* They\'re incredibly sexy, inventive and spell-binding yet not over the top in a way that it seems forced. You have to stop being so selfcritical! Your story is absolutely mesmerising and the way you are going about it is perfect. Don\'t fuss and get on with the next chapter! I have spoken!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re SO good at writing sex scenes! Don\'t worry about that.. I like the way you describe it without getting all sappy. And I like the whole idea of the plot, Harry becoming evil and abandoning his friends and stuff. Can\'t wait \'till next chapter!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the sex dream and do hope you will have more soon lol not just the sex though lol