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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A so promissing start but no updates. What a pity!!!
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
vblum12,
It\'s not the author\'s fault that people feel her story is unique. I\'ve read your story and I feel they are very much different and unique. Yours uses a potion to go back in time and Hermione planned to go back, this one uses a time turner and it is an accident. Also, there are 240 pages of Harry Potter Fanfic here. Do you really feel that there is that much of a chance that there are many readers that have read both stories? There are a few ships that have their own sections (not many though, and people don\'t use them all the time). You didn\'t invent the Hermione/Dumbledore ship. There are plenty of stories with that pairing out there. Also, once you posted your feelings, the author was kind enough to mention your story and suggest that people read it.
In all honesty, Time in a Bottle is a much better story on many levels. I remember giving you some suggestions (especially since you had Hermione still wearing her 1990s school uniform for so long!). Your story still feels very much like a rough draft/outline of an idea, where this story is well thought out and well written (it seems like it was beta read or was written by someone who really knows how to proofread his or her own work).
So few people take the time to review stories, they shouldn\'t have to be afraid that another author who appears to be quite jealous is going to come in and put down the review.
I\'m looking forward to more chapters in Time in a Bottle, and I also hope that you can get a good beta reader for Twice Around so I can look forward to more of that story as well.
It\'s not the author\'s fault that people feel her story is unique. I\'ve read your story and I feel they are very much different and unique. Yours uses a potion to go back in time and Hermione planned to go back, this one uses a time turner and it is an accident. Also, there are 240 pages of Harry Potter Fanfic here. Do you really feel that there is that much of a chance that there are many readers that have read both stories? There are a few ships that have their own sections (not many though, and people don\'t use them all the time). You didn\'t invent the Hermione/Dumbledore ship. There are plenty of stories with that pairing out there. Also, once you posted your feelings, the author was kind enough to mention your story and suggest that people read it.
In all honesty, Time in a Bottle is a much better story on many levels. I remember giving you some suggestions (especially since you had Hermione still wearing her 1990s school uniform for so long!). Your story still feels very much like a rough draft/outline of an idea, where this story is well thought out and well written (it seems like it was beta read or was written by someone who really knows how to proofread his or her own work).
So few people take the time to review stories, they shouldn\'t have to be afraid that another author who appears to be quite jealous is going to come in and put down the review.
I\'m looking forward to more chapters in Time in a Bottle, and I also hope that you can get a good beta reader for Twice Around so I can look forward to more of that story as well.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very well done. I\'m really looking forward to following this story.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it...very different from anything else I have read!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So I have to wonder why you aren\'t updating this ficu cau can\'t just go, make me addicted, and then leave me hanging here! I\'m not one for Dumbledore/Anybody NC-17 fics, because frankly; in my imagination he\'s just too old for that... But you\'re story is just great! It\'s wonderfully written and reasonable! Even if you decided to have them together in the \"present\", I\'m sure you would make it reasonable and as such wonderful... So please, update soon, \'cause I\'m waiting myself to insanity here!!!
Love, Kiss and Cookie,
~Lady Espelle
Love, Kiss and Cookie,
~Lady Espelle
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May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok honest your story is good! its well written. but when people review saying its an original idea, im sorry but i get mad! as the author of Twice Around i feel upset for my story which was put up long before yours, has the same pairing! now i understand i cant be upset considering how many have written ss/hg or dm/hp stories, so many they had to have seperate pages for them, but still i can be as annoyed as i want! so please just dont consider your idea original because i had to before you.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Succeeded in making yet another chapter that lives up to my standards and interest. Interesting plot of shoving Hermione in there; I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You always have such original ideas !! Your stories are a pleasure to read.
Waiting for more . . . . .
Glinda
Waiting for more . . . . .
Glinda
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I figured it had to be Hermio Wow Wow....140 years to span is quite a bit. Good job so far, and what a cool customer she is. I expected at least a gasp when he introduced himself as Albus Dumbledore!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really nicely written! I\'d like to read more about Dumbledore, never much written about him, young or old.