rate_review Reviews

I just finished with chapter 9 and don\'t think I have ever reviewed this story. I really like it because it is very creative and erotic. It is a bit odd to read though because of the present tense narrative that read kind of like a play instead of prose, but the plot is compelling and I\'m getting past the grammar part of me that is kind of unsettled. Anyway, I don\'t read very much slash at all and I never read the male pregnancy stories, so I am truly hoping you aren\'t going there, but I just wanted to say how much I really like the tension, sexual and otherwise between your main characters. Great job.

I really like your story, it\'s one of the very few i\'ve read that have Harry as a veela. And i like the fact that draco is the submissive one....of course i like all stories that have draco being the weaker one in the realtionship, but then maybe i\'m just twisted;) you don\'t have to put me in your story i just thought it was time i stop being lazy and actually review a story i liked. well keep up the good work!!!!!

Ooooooo, a Veela Fic! i love these! I feel that there are way to few! I like this story over all because it is easy to read and flows well. You have a very nice writing style where you are discriptive but don\'t go over board and drown out the dialogue. Oh and I would like to be at the wedding..*grins innocently* I would have reviewed anyways I swear! ^_^ well, my name is Mirabell Adones and please let me be Draco\'s cusin or something, I always wondered what it would be like to be rich and elegant inseat of the poor workaholic that I am ^_^ Look foward to an up date!

I really really really love this story!!! Please let me be in the wedding!!!

I really liker str story, but you\'re right the situation with Narcissa is depressing though I definitely won\'t stop reading. It\'s pretty cool that you have managed to bring the characters together like you have so far. I\'m looking forward to more.

Great fic!

your fic is bestbest!

continue soon!

Great job revising this story. I hope you are going to keep going with it, I am looking forward to reading more. Please update this story again soon.

YES!!! YOU UPDATED!!! LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER BTW! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I really really really love your story and I hope you update it really quick!!! Please!!

you mean.. no sex?
poor harry! poor dracy!
poor me!
.... did i say that out loud?