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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey
I jusr found this fic and read it today. it really good so far.and as to Lucius i want to be like Hermione in the third movie when she slapped Draco except with Lucius in his place. So sweet of Cissa to take harry i n so willingly even though he mate is leaving hher. I love how you are making this uot. Most veela fics they like almost immediatelychange there entire atitude which your did but still kept some of the old. i like that. If it wouldnt be to much of a problem for you i would REALLY appreciate it if you e-mail me when you update this.
I jusr found this fic and read it today. it really good so far.and as to Lucius i want to be like Hermione in the third movie when she slapped Draco except with Lucius in his place. So sweet of Cissa to take harry i n so willingly even though he mate is leaving hher. I love how you are making this uot. Most veela fics they like almost immediatelychange there entire atitude which your did but still kept some of the old. i like that. If it wouldnt be to much of a problem for you i would REALLY appreciate it if you e-mail me when you update this.
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s sooooo good! You really need to keep writing! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okey Dokey...first word...awesome...second word...great...I love this story top to bottom. I think it is one of the better ones that I have read. Keep up with your good writing skills...(^_^)
Anyways....about that competition....I have a character....
Raquel Star = daughter of Professor Star, lives with her father in France and goes to Beaxbutons, same hair as her mom but her eyes are black like coal, pale skin, 5\'4\", she\'s a pyro (think Pyro from X-Man), goth/punk/rocker whatever you want to call that, and she\'s bi-sexual...
How\'s that sound...it might be alittle much but it is around 2 o\'clock in the morning and that\'s my excuse...
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Anyways....about that competition....I have a character....
Raquel Star = daughter of Professor Star, lives with her father in France and goes to Beaxbutons, same hair as her mom but her eyes are black like coal, pale skin, 5\'4\", she\'s a pyro (think Pyro from X-Man), goth/punk/rocker whatever you want to call that, and she\'s bi-sexual...
How\'s that sound...it might be alittle much but it is around 2 o\'clock in the morning and that\'s my excuse...
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, and there\'s a geat plot! I\'m looking forward to reading future chapters!
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Actually the word \"tween\" comes from \"betwixt and between.\" IE: Not quite a teenager.
Okay. Review? You have some good ideas, and a nice sense of humour, but (the dreaded \"but\") there are parts that you rather skim over, and other parts that you belabour. Since AFF.net\'s recent server problems have rather chewed up your story anyway, you might consider revising it a bit.
BTW - although asking for reviews is alright, it\'s rather bad form to be begging and blackmailing to get them. You get reviews by writing your story and letting those that it\'s touched, either in a good or bad way, comment on it. Withholding chapters in ransom for reviews is a good way to get people to ignore your work, in my opinion.
Okay. Review? You have some good ideas, and a nice sense of humour, but (the dreaded \"but\") there are parts that you rather skim over, and other parts that you belabour. Since AFF.net\'s recent server problems have rather chewed up your story anyway, you might consider revising it a bit.
BTW - although asking for reviews is alright, it\'s rather bad form to be begging and blackmailing to get them. You get reviews by writing your story and letting those that it\'s touched, either in a good or bad way, comment on it. Withholding chapters in ransom for reviews is a good way to get people to ignore your work, in my opinion.
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story me and my friend can\'t wait till you update. We love how you made Snape find someone, or rather she find him. And she says that we\'re Harry\'s godmothers adopted childern so she can be in the fic. hope you can write a lot more when you start.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good staory. good author. postr more soon.
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i so love this story. keep it up. it\'s gonna be sad though since you can already tell narcissa will end up dieing but i know you will write it so that her death is not unnecessary. so kudos to you and good luck with the rest of the story! :D
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if you stop writing now, i shall have to beat you with a wet noodle. 20 lashes! draco\'s horribly OOC, but that\'s okay. sierra/pansy? i\'d have preferred sierra/ginny, but oh well. i hope you\'re writing a sequel to cover 7th year. and what\'ll h/d do over the summer? poor draco. his dad\'s evil, his mom\'s gonna die, and he\'s not getting any! arianna gets on my nerves. i\'d have hauled off and slapped her and DD for their duplicity. keepin secrets from harry..for shame!