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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow! this has caught my attention...now I have to go and see when it was updated. I just hope it is a current one.

I love the way your story opens up. The part with Draco and Pansy is kida confusing. But I assume you will clarify that in the next chapter or so. Please update soon.

update... PLEASE!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!
sorry for this... ehem... intelligent words

there are a few grammatical errors in this piece and i agree with \'me\' in that you should get a beta; just to iron out the kinks.
nonetheless, it\'s a great start and i look forward to the next installment.

There isn\'t much to go on here. It\'s hard to review something that really doesn\'t tell you much. Please write a bit more on this.

Very interesting so far! I can\'t wait to read more! Please update again and soon!

Tiffany

Write more. It\'s a good begining and you write well. Write more.

You ask for reviews, so I am writing one. Your story has an interesting start, although I am struggling to differentiate it from any number of other fics right now - maybe try to write a few chapters and establish a clear plot before continuing to post might be a good idea. You seem to have lots of ideas and that is good, it just seems like you are trying to do too much too soon. Your spelling and grammar need work (a beta may be a good idea) as does your interpretation of the characters. That said, you would seem to have enough talent to build on. I have to admit that I expect you to dismiss and delete this review as it is probably not what you are asking for. I am sending good vibes nonetheless.