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for Arithmancy for Muggles

by Flyingegg

person azulkan2
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. How was Hermione able to do magic without the ministry coming down on her? Or was it because it was wandless? Glad she has a friend in the \"normal\" world. Looking forward to more soon.
person scifichick774
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet. The scene with Snape and Vector was classic and you\'ve actually gotten me liking an original character in the last chapter, so kudos to you. :)
person Rosmerta
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better. I like Hermione\'s new mate from work. The sudden revelation about loving Snape was perfect. The blister was interesting - punishment for using magic, or just a consequence of Hermione using wandless magic?
person spaz141
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Surely he has more than one pair of shoes? Great shopping chapter, too bad she didn\'t buy more so I can live vicariously through her. Thanks for the update.
person Stellar Snape
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this chapter. The Arithmancy was way over my head, yet I was still able to follow the basic layout of the equations and such. I loved the image of Snape walking through the school barefoot and leaving wet prints behind. Too funny! Of all the chapters so far, this one was actually my favorite. Keep up the fab work!

~*~Laina~*~
**nemesisstar on LJ**
person Rosmerta
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hideous carpet slippers - very Albus-like, in fact! Sure Snape\'s not training himself to take over from Dumbledore?? ;D I liked Vector\'s explanations - the whole Arithmancy thing, especially the way you\'ve outlined it here, reminds me strongly of Isaac Asimov\'s science of \"psychohistory\" as posited in his Foundation series (sci-fi novels). Not, I hasten to add, that I think you\'re plagiarizing! It\'s just that, if you were to try to use science (or mathematics, statistics, whateveo pro predict the fu, I , I can\'t imagine any other way you\'d go about it than trying to predict the most likely outcomes and the outcomes of those outcomes, and chart paths from one possibility to another, and then... Okay, now I\'m getting a headache. Ouch.
person jonelin
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
shame on me! this is one of my favorite current stories running, and i haven\'t reviewed yet! great concept and very unique! bravo!! :)
person Lucie
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great.

The Snape/Vector interaction was fun to read, as two great minds were \"battling\".

And yes, he HAS gone soft. But being the good spy that he is, there\'s no doubt he will be able to keep that fact from the outer world - and the students.
person appy lady
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
enjoying your story very much, please keep up with the quick updates : )
person spaz141
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, bloody brilliant. I like it. Thanks.