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I know this is a departure for you, but it\'s very good so far. You\'ve taken the key fact that fueled the marriage challenge -- a declining popuon -on -- and shaped it into a completely different but just as intriguing plot. I\'ve always seen Snape as innately curious (he was forever tailing the Mauraders around, after allo tho this characterization of him seems fitting, especially since you\'re hinting that he\'s interested in peeling away more than the mystery around her. This I\'m-not-going-to-take-it Hermione also comes across as spot-on.

Concrit -- it doesn\'t seem in character for the Weasleys to turn against her for two reasons: They see her as family, and, almost as importantly, they\'ve never been afraid to take unpopular stands. I\'ll concede that they could mistakeningly believe that her research is false, or that the result of publicizing it would be worse than doing nothing, but even that seems somewhat un-Weasley-ish. Also, wouldn\'t Bill have to know a great deal of Arithmancy for his job as a curse-breaker for Gringotts? He could tell \'em she\'s right. (And where\'s Dumbledore in allthisthis?) It would be easier to see Fudge in the bad-guy role here ... or perhaps some other ministry person. (Hey -- Percy!)

But despite that gripe, I really like this story. Really! Keep writing.

I really like the start of this story - a new take on HG/SS and a believable and strong plot. I want to know what will eventually happen to Wizarding society! say say its your best story yet

i like this. i like how confident and cool hermione is. she\'s weighed her options, probably had her fits of anger and depression, made her plans, and now she\'s acting. she\'s so purposeful. i like this. i hope you write more.

i like this. i like how confident and cool hermione is. she\'s weighed her options, probably had her fits of anger and depression, made her plans, and now she\'s acting. she\'s so purposeful. i like this. i hope you write more.

Excellant story! Love what I\'ve read so far! It\'s quite interesting and I can\'t wait for the next update!!!

Mmm.. dessert... You now have a perfectly good excuse for more chocolate!! :D I can\'t wait to see actually happens, though, move it with the update!

Hmm, I really like! Nice little moment with Snape and Hermione and quite in character. Nice start. More please.

Oh my, you have me completely hooked already. The emotion here is incredible, yet so understated. I really can\'t wait to see more.

All right I am deadly tired and reviewing anyway.. So I hope you recon how much I like your story before I have to say much more :)
It is a ver interessting idea behind your story, and I am curious what is going to happen next. Hopefully we habe not to wait too long *sights* way,way, what I really, really liked is that you don

I love the start. So many questions...
Why is she leaving? Why is Snape even inquiring? Where are the other two (the boys) of the trio?
Poor McGonnagall. So brave. Sounded like she charged out like she did in OotP to Hagrid\'s hut. Ouch!

Cheers Egg.