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by Flyingegg

person IrishRavenX
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* If they really do end up loving each other, I wonder if Severus would leave the wizarding world for her, or if Hermione would return...I can\'t se hap happening, but one can always hope. Wonderful chapter.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... Another GREAT chapter!!! This is so very bittersweet... I am glad that they shared each other, but I feel so badly for Severus!!! His confessing of his feelings that\'s he\'s held for so long was so touching!!! I especially like the way you wrote this line:
person Claribel
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is another lovely story by you - I\'m always awe struck by writers who manage to match their style to the content of the story - I have no idea whether you have done it intentionally, but it fits so well together I had to mention it. I will look forward to your updates with pleasure.
person Sonni
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honest. Beautiful. Emotional.
person Deeble
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet is right. Beautiful, though. I loved Snape\'s plaintively hopeful (and oh-so-literary) remark that
person Deeble
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet is right. Beautiful, though. I loved Snape\'s plaintively hopeful (and oh-so-literary) remark that
person KarenDetroit
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have me crying in anticipation. This is a terribly creative and unique take on the two worlds. I cannot wait to se how it resolves. And the writing is very good, too. Thanks for sharing, please go on (and on, and on).
person deblovesdragon
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one found that to be very romantic. What do you have in store for our new lovers? Is the end near for them? I hope not.
Cheers.
person JasperPress77
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:-) This fic is cute. I like it. I wonder if Snape will give into the proposition right away or wait til after dessert to tell her that he\'d \"fancy a shag?\"
person socalsister
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was frickin\' awesome! LOL I really like this fic so please update as quickly and as often as possible!!! No pressure though. hehe