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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bittersweet. That\'s all I really have to say about this chapter besides how much I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work!
**nemesisstar on lj**
**nemesisstar on lj**
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can\'t wait to see what happens next. Wonder what Dumbledore wanted with Snape? More soon please.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story really surprised me! It\'s such an odd combination of muggle and magical, ordinary and romantic. I really like it. It seems so realistic and slightly grim, but then surprises you with magic or romance. And your writing style and character interactions are very smooth. Not to mention that the storyline is fascinating. I\'m interested in indiginous rights and cultures, so the comparisons and comments applied to the HP world were great to read, such a unique angle. I can\'t wait to read more, thank you for writing such quality fanfiction!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was most ... satisfying. Shall I put on that \"Time to say goodbye\" record now in preparation for the next chapter? Looking forward to reading much more of this!
lucie_p
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great story but it is so sad! Our favorite couple is so melancholy and the situation seems so desperate. I do hope you will work things out for them in the long run. By the way--absolutely smashing line about having eaten the food of the faerie. Actually that whole scene was great but I loved that line.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And there is more than just comedy with you. Wow, what a great chapter. Thanks.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely semi-lemon. I look forward to seeing where this fic goes.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So beautifully bittersweet. One simple and true experience that finds its beauty in the spare and honest words you used.
Powerful.
And I\'m enough of a romantic sop to hope that there is a way for a happy ending.
Oh! Severus\'s comment about dusting his heart occasionally, should she find it left there ... the perfect balance between sardonic, pathos, hope and classic Snape selfrecarecation.
Powerful.
And I\'m enough of a romantic sop to hope that there is a way for a happy ending.
Oh! Severus\'s comment about dusting his heart occasionally, should she find it left there ... the perfect balance between sardonic, pathos, hope and classic Snape selfrecarecation.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be one of the most poignant and bittersweet romances I\'ve read in a long time. When Severus asks Hermione if he can leave his heart in her flat as he has no use for it in the day to day....what writing. Thank you so much.
Helen
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Quiet emotions, undatedated but very powerful. Snape could cross back and forth between worlds but to have Hermione forever banned would eventually cause resentment and other problems. I look forward to your next update.