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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
for fuck\'s sake!!!!!!!!!!!
1. Get it proofread.
2. Lose the
gaps! makes it totally unreadable, and i don\'t care how small it looks without them.
1. Get it proofread.
2. Lose the
gaps! makes it totally unreadable, and i don\'t care how small it looks without them.
schedule
June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NEEDS MORE DETALE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I GOT LOST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grrrrrrr
schedule
May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So a beta is someone who edits and helps an author out? Is it? Hmm, I had been wondering what the hell a beta was.
Now that I know the definition, if Jaimie_the_dragon wants me to, I\'ll beta for her (you are a girl, right?)
I like where this story is going but you lack detail, need serious editing, spell checking and grammar checking. Email if interested Jaimie. (I hope I spelled your name/tag right.)
Now that I know the definition, if Jaimie_the_dragon wants me to, I\'ll beta for her (you are a girl, right?)
I like where this story is going but you lack detail, need serious editing, spell checking and grammar checking. Email if interested Jaimie. (I hope I spelled your name/tag right.)
schedule
May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I did mispell your name. Jamie, sorry. But my offer stands. I\'ll beta for you if you want me to help you improve.
schedule
May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scarlet/Jamie
schedule
May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grammar and spelling are your friend. Please, do us and yourself a favor, and use them. If you type in Microsoft Word, hit F7 once in a while, okay? And if you type in something else, just use a dictionary. The spelling mistakes hurt my eyes.
And what\'s the deal with this \"killing Hermione\" business?!
And what\'s the deal with this \"killing Hermione\" business?!
schedule
May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, I\'m sorry, I normally try to be really positive in reviews, but this story sucks. When you learn how to write, spell correctly and use correct grammar, try posting again, all right?
schedule
May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'M SORRY!!!!!! I was in a bad mood..... forgive me! I suggest you look around for a beta though, someone who can help you pace the story out a bit more, and spell and use grammar correctly... just ask around and you should find someone who\'s willing. Again, sorry for my mean comments...