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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t even read the second page, and now don\'t I feel like an ass. I only meant it in the most flattering, you write smut beautifully, way I could say it without actually saying that I\'m jealous as hell...hehehe, because I am. Great romantic story. You owe not a thing! End your stories the way you see fit! Looking forward to more!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is brilliant! Itwas beautifukky written! I love how Draco was bitter without being overemotional and melodrmatic. And everyone had forgotten that he had saved Harry Potter\'slife was unique.
And the last part was sweet without being fluffy and I love that.
And the fact that he wasn\'t the perfect Malfoy anymore but Hermione still accepted and loved him just melted my heart.
I simply love it.
~Sushi
And the last part was sweet without being fluffy and I love that.
And the fact that he wasn\'t the perfect Malfoy anymore but Hermione still accepted and loved him just melted my heart.
I simply love it.
~Sushi
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happened? Was this supposed to be a one shot story? If so, you did only okay. Why? Because there is so much here that has to be told to us! Putting the ending of the story like that was a rip off to your readers! TEN MONTHS LATER? Oh please! You have a good stoy here and it is clear that you are a good writter. Work the story, tell us what happened in those ten months. Otherwise all I get out of it as a reader is that you were too lazy to do the work and are depending upon me as the audience to do it for you.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Opps! That was story. Can anyone out there bata read these things for me? LOL!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I\'m impressed... right down to my size 8 sneakers.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely, what a good ending!!
I hope she liked it!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
I hope she liked it!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Also loved this. You know you should write something awful so not alll my reviews are the same. Lol. Anyway, like you said it could have doine with being a nit longer, but, as this was an extra fanfic request, I think you did very well. I felt so sorry for Draco and was all happy at the end (by the way; nice job on making Ron such an ass!) and it was all all scrummy :o)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet ^__^
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You write Draco\'s POV beautifully. I was unprepared for the cruelty of Ron\'s comment, it was so vicious. The outcome was lovely, and fluffy. But a nice balance for the sacrifice he\'d made.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good Zeph. It was somber and sweet at the same time.
Cheers.
Cheers.