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for Everything Unexpected

by calicat

person Lyonessheart
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is still the prologue? don\'t tell me this is Another one of thoses stories were draco an harry don#t see each other for ten years and then draco finds out he has a kid, while this is amusing once or twice it has been done often enough, so were is the originality???????????
person Amanda
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. If you still need beta reader I\'m more than willing to do it. Justil mil me and let me know.
person Keikokin
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please keep going!
person Kira21
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I felt so bad for Harry when he discovered that Draco had left indefiently. I hope when Draco does show Harry gives him a very hard time. Please write more.
person Anon
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story but I think it would of been a bit better if you had the sex scene in the first chapter.
person Blackvirgin
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is a great story! I aboslutly love it! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person sak
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I would like to see how this develops.
person cofaym
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!! Why\'d he leave??? Why would Draco leave Harry like that? *whimpers* you must continue please!
person Corki
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please dont leave me like this NOOOOO!!! i love this please update i have to read more keep up the good work
person QueenyC4Slash
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay first I\'m ganna say sorry for not reading this till today. second its a really good start and I really look forward for the next chapter!

Hearts~QC