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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story and i like to say that if some how you could continue this or mabey write another verion it would be great.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lily/Squid? Not *exactly* my usual pairing, though it was tastefully done. I appreciate the more realistic look at Lily\'s \"first time\" -- too many fics paint it as something magical and mind-blowing, when in actuality, it\'s sticky and uncomfortable. I encourage you to look over a couple of rough spots in syntax near the beginning with a beta. Keep writing! :)
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting. man, james is an ass! he prolly didnt even know that it was her first time. man, damn him! well, in any case, good story
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seems like a good start. write longer chapters and it seems you could have a long running story here
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October 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINISH IT
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As odd as that story was, I don\'t like to flame people, so.. I can say only that that was definately NOT beastality, so if you promise, you should come through. Otherwise, that was a decent story!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was a very sweet ending to part one...is there going to be a part 2? *crosses arms and taps foot*
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was...interestring...
AS YOUR PRINCESS! I COMMAND YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY *bashes author over the head withpterpter and drags their computer*
AS YOUR PRINCESS! I COMMAND YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY *bashes author over the head withpterpter and drags their computer*
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is recommended by a friend of mine and I must say I