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for The Slave

by InkaLakhala

person Lils
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you ever gonna update that story?

:)
person SnarkySnake
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah.. very nice.. I especially liked the last chapter. Would you mind to inform me when (if?) you update? :-)
person BookOfNicodemus
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been a while since I\'ve read some genuine, heart-felt, honest BDSM. I have missed it. You did excellently, superb really. The last chapter was my personal favorite - it showed a whole different side to their relationship. Loved it. Looking forward to more. There is more, right....?
person Orphelia Malfoy
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, loved the chapter, as always...but for the first time I am very sorry for Severus! I hope you manage to update soon, but don\'t worry if you don\'t.
Oh and thanks for the review ob ffn, glad you liked it!
person DragonG
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far! And sensual... :)
person Rahela
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this fic going! It\'s excellent, and I can\'t wait to read more!
person girly
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello sweet, this is very good. I have to say you are a little scary though!

As for Malfoy names I always thought they were meant to have dark associations...

Malfoy - bad deed (bad pun)
Draco - dragon
Luscius - Lucifer, the devil
Narcissus - this one is obvious, but vanity.

They are childrens books,the nice characters have nice hoest sounding names. Traditional English ones that everyone recognises. Like in the Disney Sleeping beuty, where the princess is called Araura (sunrise I think) and the bad witch is Maleficent. Can\'t really get more blatent!

But I have to agree the similarity to luscious is rather fun.

I had a dictioary moment... [Middle English lucius, alteration of licious, perhaps short for delicious, delicious. See delicious.] and [Gratifying a depraved sense; obscene.] Interesting...
person Rahela
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write ch. 3! I\'m constantly late to class because I HAVE to keep checking for it. I have to know what happens next!
person DragonG
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol! I like it! (Well, I like Snape, Lucius and bondage, so, no wonder!) Actually I think it is very good and don\'t worry about the title, it\'s short but makes a point! :)
person Orphelia Malfoy
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good to see this here...especially because your second chapter on ffn was great...want more! And now that you can go up to NC17, oh the possibilties, I can\'t wait! Update soon, please!?