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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to read more of this
I am so glad you are still posting it is
very .
.
How did you come up with all this?
Very thought provoking.
Very original.
Keep going please!
Vicki
I am so glad you are still posting it is
very .
.
How did you come up with all this?
Very thought provoking.
Very original.
Keep going please!
Vicki
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No I was wrong not really Stephen King.
He has a series colled the \"Dark Tower\"
That this sort of reminded me of.
I can\'t put my finger on what this Does
remind me of but anyway I am babbling.
I am enjoying this very much.
Please if you do move this elsewhere
Please let me know.
Vicki
He has a series colled the \"Dark Tower\"
That this sort of reminded me of.
I can\'t put my finger on what this Does
remind me of but anyway I am babbling.
I am enjoying this very much.
Please if you do move this elsewhere
Please let me know.
Vicki
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll start by saying I\'ve really enjoyed what you\'ve written so far, and I hope you\'ll stick with it.
Next, and I hope you will take this as constructive criticism, I think you may be a little /too/ AU for most of the reader base here. The AU stories I\'ve seen that get the readers tend to be an alternate world that the canon characters get transported to, or the HP world with a twist. If you don\'t get the feedback you need here, perhaps there is somewhere else to post where you can get a better readership - if you do decide to post elsewhere, and stop posting here, please let me know where I can keep up with this, as I really would like to see where it is heading!
Next, and I hope you will take this as constructive criticism, I think you may be a little /too/ AU for most of the reader base here. The AU stories I\'ve seen that get the readers tend to be an alternate world that the canon characters get transported to, or the HP world with a twist. If you don\'t get the feedback you need here, perhaps there is somewhere else to post where you can get a better readership - if you do decide to post elsewhere, and stop posting here, please let me know where I can keep up with this, as I really would like to see where it is heading!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!1 This s really good.
It reminds me of something Stephen King
would write. I think you are doing great.
I hope you update alot.It is very different
from anything I have read . If. If you want
something good to read \"Objects of Desire\"
by Azrael is about the best on this site.
I hope you keep up with this. Like I said
it is very good.
Vicki
It reminds me of something Stephen King
would write. I think you are doing great.
I hope you update alot.It is very different
from anything I have read . If. If you want
something good to read \"Objects of Desire\"
by Azrael is about the best on this site.
I hope you keep up with this. Like I said
it is very good.
Vicki
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January 7, 0000 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER. YOU HAVE A LOT OF IMAGINATION FOR A 13 GIRL. KEEP WRITING. ;P