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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally someone who mention protection or in this case the lack of said protection.
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We\'re sorry, but we really did lose interest whilst reading your fanfic from the first to the second chapter.
We don\'t exactly appreciate chatspeak, [eg. \'how r u?\' short terms for easy words. u - you.] so it was rather hard to read.
Sorry, but this was just our opinion.
And we don\'t exactly think Aunt Petunia would really act like very kind etc, I know it\'s FANfiction, but that\'s kinda overboard.
We don\'t exactly appreciate chatspeak, [eg. \'how r u?\' short terms for easy words. u - you.] so it was rather hard to read.
Sorry, but this was just our opinion.
And we don\'t exactly think Aunt Petunia would really act like very kind etc, I know it\'s FANfiction, but that\'s kinda overboard.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have terrible writting style, take everything a bit slowing and give a bit more discription and stuff
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fluff is fine. Fluff with characters GROSSLY out of character is not.
Even if one did not have the chance to read the books, the movies are a BIG CLUE
Even if one did not have the chance to read the books, the movies are a BIG CLUE
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story has a nice start, but, you do need to work on yourllinlling and grammer to make it even better.
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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Srry but that is just way to out of character for his aunt petunia.......
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Take this how you will - I am older and do not appreciate \"net\"speak. Consider cleaning up your grammar and maybe you\'ll get a better response. Good luck.