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for The Dark Room

by shellylynnc

person jj
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
make mari choose snape!!!!!!!!!!
person jongirl
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the only thing i have to say is UPDATE NOW!
person MadameSnape
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ye Gods *fan*fan*fan* Oh I absolutely hate Lucius, but I really love him too. He is an arrogant bastard and you write him so well. They thrive on each other. He won\'t treat her well though if she marries him. Snape offering for her, standing up to Malfoy was touching. He really can be sensitive. Update soon so I can see what he\'s got in store for Mari next...
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is no doubt the best.
Please please please update.
Why did you have to stop I hate cliffhangers
person Mara
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic!! Lucious is a bastard, a hot bastard. but still a bastard. ^^ and you play him as such! and the snapeness! hes perfect. Just as I\'d imagine him in such er...situations. hehe. *^^* I\'ve actually been looking for a fic like this so, keep with the updates! its very good! I\'d also be very happy to beta for you if you\'re interested!
person MadameSnape
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was one hot chapter. *fans myself* Lucius is so dominating. The part about her ass was funny. Is she going to marry Lucius? I\'ll bet Snape doesn\'t ike that at all.
person redsugg
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE DON\'T LET LUCIUS MARRY HER HE IS AN ARROGANT ASSHOLE AND I THINK SEVERUS SHOULD BE THE ONEMARRMARRY HER CAUSE HE HAD HER FIRST SO PLEASE DON\'T GIVE HER TO LUCIUS HE DOES NOT APPRECIATE HER AT ALL.

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person MADAMESNAPE
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ye Gods this is one hot story. Wow. *fan, fan, fan* Snape and Malfoy. Incredible.
person star
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor girl1 I wonder if there is love between the three of them??? update soon!
person SnapeLover
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again very hot. You do the smut so well and I can\'t wait for you to update. This story is so kinky, I love both Lucius and Snape. Yeah. *fan myself* *wow*