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for The Dark Room

by shellylynnc

person June
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE NOW, not wait another month! Stupid woman for even THINKING of Lucius! That icky, squicky Malfoy....as if he\'d let her keep a career finding potion cures for Voldemort\'s dark potions. Doesn\'t she have any respect for herself? D/S can be fun when it\'s a safe game (with safe words) for mutual pleasure, not when it\'s a 24/7, 365-day LIFE SENTENCE.

As for you, shelleylynn: UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE FASTER! Or else's a's a whipping for you!
person star
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still say pick Snape!! btw-great chapter!
person CursedOne
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Snape!
person MySeverus
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Snape, Snape, Snape
person mele
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i vote for snape. let me put it this way - training lucius to be more caring would be like soaking a rock in water. you might wear it down eventually, but what a waste of time! snape is in to details and details are very, very important. aloha, mele
person Snape\'s dark-eyed girl
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Oh how I hope she stays with Snape!
person Lady of the Lake
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it loved it loved it, cant wait for the next chapter
person MadameSnape
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the most fantastic story..Ye Gods Snape is wonderful isn\'t he? He can be original too. I don\'t envy Mari her choice. Lucius does have his charms. I can\'t wait to see what you do...
person jeannette
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think she shouldn\'t marry neither of them. i think it would be a twist if she actually like how draco treated her , and married draco. i think it would piss lucius off and break severus\' heart ,but maybe a young stud is what she needs. she likes to be dominated,and she likes the sweet side of things, someone as young as draco can provide that. since his memory was modified,he would remember having sex with her,it would be a new experience for him. she could accidently on purpose to bump into him at hogsmead. it would be so great.
person star
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry but I wouldn\'t want someone to call me a whore and not know what color my eyes are. I vote for Severus!!!