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for The Dark Room

by shellylynnc

person SL
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Incredible...must take cold shower...Lol...I hope this story goes on for a long time...
person June
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr . . . must I repeat myself? SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE NOW! As for the end of Chapter 8, I don\'t think your Lucius is interested in love (judging from your previous chapters). Since Mari is an intelligent potions researcher, she should be smart enough to choose Snape. Right? Right? WRITE!!!
person star
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update this story!!!
person kyttilinn
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
animal sex.. muaha priceless. fuck. you really need to update again. no kidding. ^.^ now... what does that face look like its doing? hehehe ahm off topic! muahaha FUCKING UPDATE!
person MadameSnape
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter title has \'sex\' in it. I wonder why. I love the drunk talk. It seems like Lucius is softening up a bit hmmm? Holding her hand and now staying the night. Running his hand through Snape\'s blood, oooh that sent shivers down my spine. For once Mari is causing the pain...*groans*fans* Very hot...
person SnapeLady
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutey priceless. I laughed sooo hard. \'Is it swine, swine? I\'m snot snot\' Hilarious. Snape pushing him over. Ye gods. Oh and the sex was great too. The heady experience of blood, pain and passion..ohhhh. Glorious.
person Sarah Potter
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting...i wonder who she will choose...keep writing!
person MMR
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Wow*This is one piece of great smut. I\'m loving it so please update. Oh and it\'s got to be Snape. Given the choice who\'d want to live with a jerk live Malfoy for the rest of her life? Snape all the way.
person SnapeLover
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my all tiavoravorite. Hot! You do the sex scenes sooo well and the men...perfect. Gotta say I hope she picks Snape though. Lol. Missy
person Me
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much. Keep writing. (Oh...and I\'d really like her to choose Snape. But obviously it\'s your story and whoever she chooses will work out. But yeah...I <3 Snape, especially in this story)