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for The Dark Room

by shellylynnc

person June
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SHRIEK!!!!! NEED UPDATES!!!!! Especially need to get her away from the icky Lucius who can die anytime now (HINT!). He can dienfulnfully, slowly, quickly, any way - just kill him!

CRACK!!!! (That's the sound of my whip hitting your back.) I'm chaining you to your keyboard now until you finish this story!

SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! She's a Ravenclaw, she has to be smart enough to CHOOSE SNAPE!
person Sarah Potter
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Fic! But write more quickly, can't wait 2 read the rest!!

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person Vindictive
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic! I hope you update soon, and your Lucius character is awesome. Also, that was a good cliffie you left at the end of the chapter. Can\'t wait to see what will happen, and what the \"fathers-to-be\" will do. Please update soon!
person Eris13
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Lucius!!! Man, why do you have to leave us all hanging there? It\'s gettin\' REAL good! I was rooting for Lucius, but since both of their marks were presented, this is going to get interesting! Great writer, great fanfic! Please, write more...
person SnapeLady
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you\'re going to do it arent you. *Laughs* You sneaky little devil you. Fabulous! Loved her tirade by the way..
person star
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg how can that be? update!!!!
person June
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is now official: you killkilling me.

Chapter 9 - CLIFFHANGER!!! Red stain AND black stain!?!?! She\'s having twins?? I still say SNAPE is the best bet. Malfoy can come see the baby on supervised visits on a tight leash (may he choke on it!). Ewww....the red stain doesn\'t mean it could be DRACO\'s kid, does it? A fate worse than death! Besides, it sounds like there are a bunch of pregnant witches that Lucius could/should marry ... knows his way around the obstetrics floor, eh ... And don\'t forget Voldemort -- Lucius is still on the dark side, opposite of Mari\'s work.

Don\'t be a dunderhead author -- SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! SNAPE! CHOOSE SNAPE! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE! Or else Snape will take away house points and assign you detention with Malfoy! Talking about dunderheads -- Malfoy needed to be TOLD that he\'s being too rough, stringing her up for a whole week and having Draco rape her? The combined Malfoy IQ points can be counted on one hand! MUST CHOOSE SNAPE NOW!

[Please ... reviewer on hands and knees ...]
person shymmeri
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no, sorry, nobody likes poor, sexy Lucius. We\'re all too busy getting off on this story and rooting on Sexy Sevy to may much mind to the fair-haired man. OH, but the idea that he might like to be dominated uck uck Severus off is very interesting indeed... *maniacal laughter*
person Lauralee
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re fanfic is AWESOME! I must admit that you\'re extremely good at reaching practically everyone\'s desires and fantasies! I know I\'m late in discovering your works of art, but these are the best, damn stories I\'ve read on this site so far. Not many grammar mistakes at all, variety with scenarios (which is very impnt!)nt!), and great use of vocabulary. Please write more because I love Lucius\' character and the way your portray him... Again, awesome!
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update update please write more about lucius mmmmm lucius