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for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

by Veresna

person B.
schedule March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kim
schedule March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Chpater, I was dying for an update and 2 at once thanks! Love how he is \"kind\" if you can call it that and still be in his character. As always wonderful details.
person kim
schedule March 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes liked this one as well!!! Very Good Chapter.
person Ravenmerc
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
May I worship you as the god like being you are? I am so torn I want more of Helena and Snape, but I want more of Celia and Snape....Sorry I\'m a greedy little girl when this is some of the best fanfic I have ever read after years of it. Please don\'t STOP. And now I lay my head down to sleep I pray my body to Snape for keep. HE HE I love that guy..
person jongal
schedule February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A new chapter! It's terrifi alw always, I got all gooey reading about how Snape taking care of her. Can't wait to read more!
person Kim
schedule February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Vnicenicely done, if one can say that about such a horrific (hope I spelled that right) subject. I really do enjoy your writing, and I am see some of those redeeming qualities in Snape. Thanks for update so soon. Kim
person Frini
schedule February 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
His hands were trembling!!!! I never imagined Snape nervous let alone trembling...for a prostitute! So ... romantic...I don't know....I really liked it. Didn't like what the Death Eaters did to Celia though. Bad, nasty men who should be castrated!!!! Oh, and the part where he thinks about the sonets...amazing! Really nie indeed.
Love
Frini
person Sarah
schedule February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have never read fanfiction from a better author. I really mean it! Wow!
person Amanda
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better. Keep going. I am reminded of the old saying, "no good deed goes unpunished," and both Celia and Snape seem to be getting their share. Hopefully there will be a bit more hot sex and other stuff. And hopefully the nasty snakey Snape will reappeoon.oon. Well, after Celia is fully healed. hehehehehehe. Keep up the good work. You have a gift with our favorite greasy professor.
person andrea
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's apparent there's more to Celia than meets the eye here....at the end of part 5. Here's hoping Malfoy/Snape eventually have karmic retribution....even if it's just Celia getting even. Now that would be fun! :)
Great stuff...keep it coming.