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for Love's Labours; Paradise Lost

by Veresna

person Ricky Roo
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I wasn\'t quite expecting he\'d wipe her memory. Must be because of the Death Eater thing... or the confession he made about his 2 or 3 students per year... anyway, it\'s going well!
Lara
person Sassy
schedule May 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More than one month later...and still no new chapter. :tsk-tsks: I love this story, and its kiiiilling me! Please update soon? Please? :big eyes:
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\ few few chapter in this great little fic.. and at the end of one you put an authors note that you had a boyfriend who was told in a past life he must have been a lesbian... all I can say is this: I am so jealous *GRIN* I can\'t begin to tell youo how funny that is ;)

Great job so far!

Karena Elizabeth
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so excited to see where this story might end! Please update again soon!! And can we have a new chapter from Snape\'s POV? Just a little bit? What in the world is he thinking through all this!?

Thank you so much,
Karena Elizabeth
person ZeDrippyVessel
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay - I am going to be completely and totally hnest. I am a LOTR nut, hopelessly in love with Haldir, the Master Elf of Arrogance. But every now and then I get this nasty hankering for the darkness of Severus Snape and sneak over when no one is looking. And I love how you have written him! I hope my nev never catches me! (And if he does, I\'m sure he will understand!) Please update soon!

Zee
person violet
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my favorite pieces on the net right now. your writing style is absolutely beautiful, and that you\'ve managed to keep Snape in character even a psuedo-romantic context is very impressive. the update of a two-parted chapter made my day. this is wonderful, I hope that you continue
person Persephone
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An update at last! Thank you for another great chapter to this wonderful piece. PLEASE continue!
person Kim
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I have missed you, Glad you are back. Lovely chapter what a change for our Snape. Need to get to the next chapter to see what happens next. Thanks, Kim
person Lori
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that chapter was so fabulous. I love how you did the flashback sequences. And you did it in a way that is not confusing for the reader at all! Their relationship is so intense. I\'ve missed this story. Thank you so much for updating!
person Sarah T.
schedule April 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this latest update. I enjoyed it! Can\'t wait for more.